Monday, February 20, 2017

Swing bridge




WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing
Once upon a time there was an old  junky rickety  bridge. It was so dangerous that when people go across it they never come back.  I think that`s why  it looks like it's super dangerous. I hope the bridge does not  break. I hope it doesn’t because since the bridge is old it shouldn't  collapse. I wonder what will happen to the swing bridge. I hope it will  be ok before it  collapses  because since it`s very very old and dangerous it could break down and if it did no one will find out what's on the other side, only the people who went there. I really thought it was in a jungle because it has trees a lake or pond and it looks like a jungle. I have a feeling that there's a tree house across the bridge. But I think it's a really really old tree house. I also wonder if the bridge is stable enough to cross. I wonder what kind of height it is. I have a feeling it’s about 100 feet high or more. I can smell nature through my nose. I can taste the sweet fresh air and I can see a lot of trees fog and swamps. I'm really concerned about how the bridge got here in the first place and why did the bridge get chosen to be there?I touched a special tree. I heard the rain going down from the sky.
WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing
Once upon a time there was an old  junky rickety  bridge. It was so dangerous that when people go across it they never come back.  I think that`s why  it looks like it's super dangerous. I hope the bridge does not  break. I hope it doesn’t because since the bridge is old it shouldn't  collapse. I wonder what will happen to the swing bridge. I hope it will  be ok before it  collapses  because since it`s very very old and dangerous it could break down and if it did no one will find out what's on the other side, only the people who went there. I really thought it was in a jungle because it has trees a lake or pond and it looks like a jungle. I have a feeling that there's a tree house across the bridge. But I think it's a really really old tree house. I also wonder if the bridge is stable enough to cross. I wonder what kind of height it is. I have a feeling it’s about 100 feet high or more. I can smell nature through my nose. I can taste the sweet fresh air and I can see a lot of trees fog and swamps. I'm really concerned about how the bridge got here in the first place and why did the bridge get chosen to be there?I touched a special tree. I heard the rain going down from the sky.

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